Caitlyn's Essay
Mario's Essay
Marceullus's Essay
We recently wrote about changes we would like to make in our school lunchroom. Even though Microsociety's lunchroom is awesome, there are a few changes we would love to make!! Read these Wonderful Writer's essays on how they would change our lunchroom. Caitlyn's Essay Mario's Essay Marceullus's Essay
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Mrs. Lichucki
2/13/2014 12:33:42 am
Caitlyn, I wish we had more desserts too! I also like cake and ice cream. Your five paragraph essay is nicely written. Good job on your transitions at the beginning of your paragraphs.
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Mrs. Lichucki
2/13/2014 12:41:09 am
Mario, your voice really shined throughout your entire essay. Good job. You also did a great job spelling and punctuating the word "Delicious!" at the beginning of your introduction.
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Mrs. Lichucki
2/13/2014 12:43:33 am
Marcellus, I like desserts too. It's okay to have desserts every now and then. I like that idea!
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